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Today we read two diary entries based on what it would be like if they lived on the moon. The first one’s handwriting was very impressive as it was clear and very neat. They tried very hard to spell tricky words and got most of them correct! They even wrote two pages of work which we were very pleased with. The use of time conjunctions was outstanding! The pupil also used adjectives to make their writing more descriptive. We were delighted with this pupil’s piece of work and we hope they keep it up.

We also read another pupil’s diary entry which was equally amazing! They had a detailed description of what it’s like to live on the moon. They also used a few adjectives to improve their piece of work even more. As well as that, their handwriting was legible and it was very clear to read.

Good job both of you!

-Kaim and Zahra 6B J